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Robot
Jan 30, 2008 18:32:57 GMT
Post by Silvereel on Jan 30, 2008 18:32:57 GMT
This is a poem I wrote. I suppose it is horrible, but here it is. Please review harshly ROBOT: A POEM From little vacuums, To car makers. From these, So humble beginnings, You did come. No mind, no thought. They made you look human, They gave you skin. Your mind developed, What men can do, You can too. Robot, how far, Have you come?
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Robot
Jan 31, 2008 7:07:34 GMT
Post by lukaskirkby on Jan 31, 2008 7:07:34 GMT
It's a nice little poem. There's nothing special about it, but it's nice to read.
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Robot
Jan 31, 2008 16:46:44 GMT
Post by Silvereel on Jan 31, 2008 16:46:44 GMT
Any certain points that are bad about it? To tell the truth, I was thinking of sending it to a sci fi magazine...
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Robot
Feb 1, 2008 7:39:00 GMT
Post by lukaskirkby on Feb 1, 2008 7:39:00 GMT
There's nothing particularly bad about it, there's just nothing really good about it.
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Robot
Apr 12, 2008 8:20:28 GMT
Post by dudettemal on Apr 12, 2008 8:20:28 GMT
hmm, is that bad or good? it's a half-full, half-empty question!!! ahhh!!!
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Robot
Apr 12, 2008 8:31:09 GMT
Post by Tommy XKR! on Apr 12, 2008 8:31:09 GMT
hmm, is that bad or good? it's a half-full, half-empty question!!! ahhh!!! that question is so stupid. I'm an optimist by nature. But I say half-empty.
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Robot
Apr 12, 2008 8:33:23 GMT
Post by dudettemal on Apr 12, 2008 8:33:23 GMT
I just don't answer, i don't want the drink anyway.
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Robot
Apr 13, 2008 6:31:44 GMT
Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 13, 2008 6:31:44 GMT
The glass is half drunken.
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Robot
Apr 13, 2008 12:50:16 GMT
Post by Tommy XKR! on Apr 13, 2008 12:50:16 GMT
The glass is half drunken. rolf.
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